BLOG 2B.
My conference time with my English professor was unexpected and really unusual. It was that way because I thought what I wrote for my first draft did make sense, since the topic was really cool and interesting too. It was "Love and Intimacy", well who doesn't want to read that but when I went to her to listen to her feedback, it did not go the way I thought it would, she told me it was not something that she was looking for her, at first I did not understand but later when she explained it to me clearly, I started seeing her point, I realized that she is right, I wrote on a very broad topic, anything could come under it. There are so many things one could think if they hear the topic "love and intimacy". She made me realize that it wasn't as cool as I thought it was. So then I started writing on Criminal Witnessing, at the end of my 2nd draft I realized that this is a more narrowed and specific topic and I can learn more from it.